My writing teacher, Cissy, was the most meticulous and the strictest teacher I had ever seen. Pursuing a nearly perfect class, she had high requirement in our photos’ presentation. Although the presentation was limited within three minutes, from selecting the photos to organizing the language to thinking about the nuclear idea, all of the processes should be prepared a long time and couldn’t be dealt with causally; otherwise, you would receive her merciless comment. Any unsatisfactory words occurring in the presentation, breaking in without waiting for the students finishing their speech, she pointed out their faults by sharp words, making you heartbroken and feel like suffering a heavy rain suddenly in a sunny day. Although in simple recital, her strict style still played an important role in it. Disappointed and sad, everyone had experienced the criticism from Cissy, because she thought that not only did we lack right rhythm, but also we couldn’t express our emotion completely and adjust our volume. As a result, receiving her praise was seen as the great honor in our class. A meticulous attitude should be kept in her class. To show respect to the speaker, she didn’t allow us to whisper and after every presentation, genuine applause should be given. It was as a punishment that anyone who forgot to take her picture in the presentation would be cut down her scores and delayed her presentation in the last class. Indeed, being her students made you in risk of being engulfed by her sharp words, but in the same time, due to her strict and meticulous attitude, you would be greatly improved in writing.

　　我的`寫作老師，西西，是最細(xì)致、最嚴(yán)格的老師我見過。追求一個(gè)近乎完美的班級(jí)，她對(duì)我們的照片有很高的要求。雖然表現(xiàn)為有限的三分鐘內(nèi)，從選擇照片來組織語言的核心理念的思考，所有的流程要準(zhǔn)備很長(zhǎng)一段時(shí)間不能用因果關(guān)系的處理;否則，你將接受她無情的評(píng)論。在演示文稿中出現(xiàn)任何不滿意的話，斷無等待的學(xué)生完成他們的講話，她指出他們的錯(cuò)誤的尖銳的話，讓你傷心，覺得遭受大雨突然在一個(gè)陽光燦爛的日子。雖然簡(jiǎn)單的獨(dú)奏音樂會(huì)，她嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)淖黠L(fēng)仍然發(fā)揮了重要的作用。失望和悲傷，每個(gè)人都經(jīng)歷了由茜茜的批評(píng)，因?yàn)樗�認(rèn)為我們不僅缺乏正確的節(jié)奏，但我們也不能表達(dá)我們的情感完全和調(diào)整音量。作為一個(gè)結(jié)果，得到她的贊美被視為在我們班的偉大榮譽(yù)。一個(gè)細(xì)致的態(tài)度應(yīng)該保持在她的課上。為了表示對(duì)演講者的尊重，她不允許我們?cè)诿恳淮窝葜v中輕聲低語，在每次演講之后，都應(yīng)該給予真正的掌聲。這是作為一種懲罰，誰忘記帶她的照片在演示文稿將被削減她的分?jǐn)?shù)和延遲她的介紹，在最后一節(jié)課。事實(shí)上，她的學(xué)生讓你陷入了被她尖銳的言辭所吞噬的風(fēng)險(xiǎn)，但同時(shí)，由于她嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)細(xì)致的工作態(tài)度，你會(huì)在寫作上有了很大的提高。

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