2017年高考全國(guó)1卷英語(yǔ)作文范文及賞析一
　　Dear Ieslie,
　　As scheduled, we will have a Chinese lesson next weekend .Considering our students are preparing for their final exam,I suggest we have the lesson in the park near our school.
　　The mainly course of our class is to learn the poem of Tang Dynasty.It's universally acknowledged that the poem of Tang Dynasty is one of the solid foundations of our culture. A large number of talent poets showed their view about the society and expressed their satisfaction with the beauty of our motherland. You can broaden your horizon and have a better understanding of our colorful culture through this study.
　　Knowing the history of Tang Dynasty is better for you before having class. It's the society that creates the brilliant poem.
　　Yours
　　Li Hua.
　　點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文要點(diǎn)覆蓋較全面，文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤較少，長(zhǎng)短句運(yùn)用合理，結(jié)合了簡(jiǎn)單句同時(shí)運(yùn)用了較多的復(fù)雜句式，如主語(yǔ)從句It’s universally acknowledged that…，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型It's the society that…非謂語(yǔ)結(jié)構(gòu)作狀語(yǔ)Considering our students are preparing for…等等；同時(shí)恰當(dāng)使用了一定的高級(jí)詞匯如solid foundation，broaden one’s horizons等。
　　建議：1 文章要點(diǎn)方面，建議時(shí)間更精確些，比如下周周幾幾點(diǎn)到幾點(diǎn)；2 語(yǔ)法方面，注意細(xì)節(jié)語(yǔ)法的錯(cuò)誤，比如mainly改成main，poem改成poems等。