Conghua is a city with many beautiful places.      Conghua is famous for its hot springs. Many tourists like to come to Conghua to enjoy hot springs. It is very comfortable.       You can go to the Conghua Rose Garden and enjoy the beautiful flowers. There are many delicious foods. Summer, is the harvest time of litchi. Litchi is a specialty of Conghua, so it is very delicious.      The most famous street in Conghua is street corner. This is the place to go if you want to visit some shops and department stores. I like Conghua best.     After listening to my introduction, the heart of it? Conghua has something for everyone, so why not visit Conghua this year?

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   Conghua is a city with many beautiful places.  It is famous for its hot springs. Many tourists like to come to Conghua to enjoy hot springs. It is very comfortable.      

  If you like the beautiful nature, you can go to the Conghua Rose Garden and enjoy the beautiful flowers there. The most famous street in Conghua is street corner. This is the place to go if you want to visit some shops and department stores.

  You can still find delicious food in Conghua. Litchi is a specialty product of Conghua. summer is the harvest time, you can come and enjoy the delicous litchis.

   After listening to my introduction,  why not visit Conghua this year?

    初二:鐘慧婷

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