My mother is the greatest mother in the world, she takes care of all the family chores and she never complains. I know she it is not easy for her to do so, for she gives up her career when she has me, so I am so thankful to her. On this mother’s day, I just want to show her my gratitude and let her know that I love her so much. 
我的母親是世界上最偉大的母親,她照料了所有的家庭瑣事,她從不抱怨。我知道她是不容易的,因?yàn)樗�放棄了她的事業(yè),當(dāng)她有了我的時(shí)候,所以我很感謝她。在這個(gè)母親節(jié)里,我只是想告訴她我的感激之情,讓她知道我是如此愛她。

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My mother is the greatest mother in the world, she takes care of all the family and does the chores by herself, but she never complains. I know it is not easy for her to do so, for she gave up her career when she had me. I am so thankful to her. On this mother’s day, I just want to show her my gratitude and let her know that I love her so much. 

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