Hi,My name is Lufeng.English names Henry.I is china boy.My favorite season is summer.I can eat ice cream.I can wear t-shirts.I can't drink too much cold drinks.My favorite season is summer.How about you?

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Hi, my name is Lufeng and my English name is Henry. I am a Chinese boy. My favorite season is summer because I can eat ice cream and I can wear T-shirts. I like summer very much. How about you? 

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