2016-05-05 來源：作文網(wǎng)原創(chuàng)
The four seasons in a year.They are spring,summer,autumn and winter.But my favorite season is autumn.Because the weather is good and the coulds are beautiful . I love autumn.Because is have many food. What about you?
修改后：
There are four seasons in a year. They are spring, summer, autumn and winter. And my favorite season is autumn. Because the weather is cool and the coulds are beautiful. I love autumn.
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