Snow sister gone, spring girl wearing a green skirt, it is very beautiful，I like spring very much, because it makes everything full of vitality.It also lost our low-spirited attitude,More important is that we can go to the spring and the children together to fly kites, close ours eyes and feel the spring breeze, all this is how good       Breathe in pure breath, feel the vitality of all things, the body can not help light up, his face filled with a happy smile, unaware, I was infected with the vitality of spring, turn to a gust of wind passes over the mountains, could not help but sigh of spring charm a

修改后：
Winter is gone, and here comes the spring which is very beautiful. I like spring very much, because it makes everything full of vitality. What's more, we can go out to play in spring and the children can fly kites together. We can stand under the sun, with our eyes closing and feel the spring breeze. How wonderful! We can breathe the fresh air, watch the beautiful flowers and hear the birds singing.

修改老師：Crystal 老師 

    初三:易珂辛

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