The ancients said: "a year's plan is in the spring of the day of the plan in the morning." Spring is a season full of vigor, but also my favorite season!  Spring is the time for all things to recover,Let us hug in spring!  In the comfort of the season, we can shed heavy clothing. I love to have a picnic with my friends at the weekend and feel the breath of spring. We also enjoy flying kites in the blue sky and listen to beautiful music together.   Spring is a very good time.I hope to hug in spring at once!

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The old saying goes: "Make your whole year's plan in the spring and the whole day's plan in the morning." Spring is a season full of vigor, and also is my favorite season! In spring, all things come back to life. It's time to go out to enjoy the warm weather. In spring, I love having a picnic with my friends at the weekend. We can breathe the fresh air. And we also enjoy flying kites and listening to music together. Spring is a wonderful time. I love spring!

修改老師：Crystal 老師

    初三:朱晨

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