I like spring。I like spring grass green, purple petunias, peach powder, narcissus white, and so on。I like to embrace spring, embrace spring flowers and plants trees, insects, fish, birds。I embrace the spring，like a baby in her mother's arms, comfortable, easy and comfortable sleep，sleep is very sweet very sweet。Spring is a great season，it makes all things recovery，it makes the world become full of vitality。All the children like embrace spring，embrace the color of nature，they could be very comfortable and happy。All the people like to embrace the spring，because they are self-evident peace at the spring。  Let's have to embrace the spring。The flowers will smile，the birds can fly free，all creatures are grateful to the world,they can abandon sorrow，give up trouble embrace spring！

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 I like spring. I like the green grass and colorful flowers in spring. I like to embrace spring, like a baby in her mother's arms, comfortableand sweet. Spring is a great season, it makes all things come back to life and makes the world become full of vitality. The flowers are blooming and smiling, the birds are flying freely and singing happily, and the wind is blowing gently and warmly. I love spring.
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