Spring will coming soon,and I am so happy to see it again. I love spring because of its beautiful scenery,I can take my ease to play.I can fly the kite with my parents and friends.In addition ,I like doing some sports,so I can go hiking with my friends and see the nature beauty.I can also have a picnic with them. When the spring comes,I will open my arms to meet the spring arrival.I miss you very much,so could you give me a hug?
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Spring is coming soon, and I am happy to see it again.
I love spring because of its beautiful scenery. I can play outside. I can fly the kite with my parents and friends. In addition, in spring I can go hiking with my friends and see the beautiful nature. I can also have a picnic with them.
When the spring comes, I will open my arms to welcome its arrival. I miss you
very much, so could you give me a hug?
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