Spring is coming, flowers in full bloom everywhere. Rivers thawing, small fish bouncing around inside the cheerful. Animals wake up, in the absence of the bunds carefree running around on the grass. The students a little bit taller, and understand a little bit. In such a beautiful scenery, let us together embrace spring!!!!

修改后：
Spring is coming. Flowers are in full bloom everywhere. Rivers are thawing and small fish are jumping out of the river. Animals are running on the grass. The students are flying kites and playing. In such a beautiful season, let us embrace spring!

修改老師：Crystal老師 

    五年級:蔡泓奧

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