As  students ，it  is  necessary  to  lstudy  hard。But   it  is  difficult   to  do  it 。So  you  need  a  good  way  to  learn  it。

        First，you  have to  have  a  dictionary  。When  you   do not   understand   the  words‘  meaning  ，you  can  look  words  up    in  a   dictionary。Second，if  you   can not   understand   your   English teacher‘s  word 。You  can  practice   listening   by  watching  English  movies   or  by   listening  to  English  songs 。 Third，you  should  learn  from  your  mistakes   and     try to remenber 1-5 words every day ,then you can lean English well day by day 。

         In  a  word，you  must  believe  in  yourself  。Persist will be able to succeed .

                                                                                                                                                            2016 .3.12    14；20

修改后：

 As students, it is necessary to study hard. But it is difficult for us. So we need  some good ways to do it.
 Firstly, we must have a dictionary. When we do not know the words, we can  look them up in the dictionary. Secondly, we must practise more. Such as we can  practise listening by  watching  English  movies or listening  to  English  songs. Thirdly, we should  learn  from  our  mistakes. At the same time, we had better make a plan, like trying to remember 1-5 words every day. Then we can learn English well day by day. 

批改老師：Crystal老師

     初三:劉永杰

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