中考英語(yǔ)作文范文及評(píng)析:記敘文3

　　【習(xí)作要求】

　　根據(jù)中文意思和英文提示詞語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)出意思連貫、符合邏輯的英文文段。所給的英文提示詞語(yǔ)必須都用上，句數(shù)不限；中文提示內(nèi)容不必逐句翻譯。

　　一個(gè)雨天，李莉乘出租車(chē)回家。在車(chē)?yán)锼�發(fā)現(xiàn)司機(jī)在學(xué)英語(yǔ)。他對(duì)李莉說(shuō)了些什么? 此事對(duì)你學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)有何啟發(fā)? 為支持北京奧運(yùn)你打算做些什么?

　　(1) one rainy day, go home, by taxi

　　(2) in the car, find, was learning English

　　(3) said to Li Li, I, weak, English, when at school, now work hard, to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

　　(4) I think... to show support （n.支持）for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games

　　【中考英語(yǔ)作文范文】

　　One rainy day, Li Li went home by taxi. In the car she found (that) the driver was learning English. He said to Li Li: "I was weak in English when I was at school. Now I'm working hard at it to help with the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games." I think I should learn from the driver. English is very important to us because it is widely used all over the world. As a student, I'll do my best to learn English well at school. And I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】

　　第一句很重要，以便確定全文時(shí)態(tài)。句與句之間要連貫。關(guān)鍵句要用上，如：I'm going to speak English as much as possible to show support for the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games.

　　(1) 格式：簡(jiǎn)介

　　(2) 人稱(chēng)：第三人稱(chēng)

　　(3) 時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，一般過(guò)去時(shí)，一般將來(lái)時(shí)

　　(4) 短語(yǔ)、句式、句型：短語(yǔ)與句式已給出，句型包括簡(jiǎn)單句、直接引語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)從句