中考英語作文范文及評(píng)析:記敘文2
　　【習(xí)作要求】
　　請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所給李玲的個(gè)人小檔案，以Mygoodfriend為題，寫一篇英語短文，介紹李玲的基本情況。要求條理清楚，語句通順，體現(xiàn)表中的全部內(nèi)容，不得少于12句話。

中文名：李玲  英文名：Susan
性別：女  年齡：15
祖籍：青海  學(xué)校：第八中學(xué)
年級(jí)：三  班級(jí)：二
特長：數(shù)學(xué)、英語  愛好：唱歌、看電視、打排球
優(yōu)點(diǎn)：友好，善良，樂于助人，學(xué)習(xí)努力  　

　　【中考英語作文范文】
My Good Friend
　　I have a good friend. Her Chinese name is Li Ling, and Susan is her English name. She is from Qinghai. Li Ling is fifteen years old. She studies in No. 8 Middle School. She is in Class Two, Grade Three. Li Ling is good at maths and English. She likes singing and playing volleyball very much. And she sings quite well. She likes watching TV, too. Li Ling is very kind and friendly. She studies very hard and always likes helping others. What a good girl she is! I like her!

　　【名師點(diǎn)評(píng)】
　　這是一篇記敘文，內(nèi)容要交待清楚、全面，要注意中英文的表達(dá)習(xí)慣，如漢語中年級(jí)在前，班級(jí)在后，而英語正相反；首尾句要格外留意，要保持短文的完整性。

　　(1) 格式：人物介紹
　　(2) 人稱：第三人稱
　　(3) 時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)　　
　　(4) 短語：have a good friend, English name, to be from, No. 8 Middle School, in Class Two, Grade Three, to be good at, like singing and playing, sing well, like watching TV, study hard, what a good girl
　　(5) 句型：陳述句與感嘆句