完型填空 (補(bǔ)全短文)

    "三遍法":第一遍了解大意;第二遍作題;第三遍檢查確認(rèn)

    例題:

    Alex ___1___ in a factory in a big town. He liked ____2____ very much, and was very good at it. Whenever he was free, he went down to the small ___3___ behind the factory and tried to catch some fish, but there were very ___4____ there, because the water of the river was dirty.. then one summer he went to the seaside during his holidays and ___5__ at a small, cheap hotel.

    "I've never fished in the sea ____6___," he thought. "It will be rather different from fishing in our river."

    On the first day he ____7____ a lot of fish and was very ____8___. He gave them to he hotel, and they ____9___ them for all the persons at the hotel, and they enjoyed them very much. After that, he did this every day. But when he got his bill at the ____10____ of his holidays, he saw on it "For oil to fry fish (7days): 14 dollars."

    答案:1. worked 2. fishing 3. river 4. few 5.stayed 6. before

    7. caught 8.happy/pleased/glad 9. cooked 10. end

    3.短文寫(xiě)作

    短文寫(xiě)作評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)

    評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn):

    第一檔:(15分-13分)符合題目要求,整篇表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法無(wú)誤,詞匯拼寫(xiě)正確,卷面整潔。

    第二檔:(12分-10分)符合題目要求,整篇表達(dá)清楚,語(yǔ)法有少量錯(cuò)誤,少量拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤,卷面欠整潔。

    第三檔:(9分-6分)基本符合題目要求,漏掉若干關(guān)鍵詞,超出了題目限制,整篇表達(dá)基本清楚,語(yǔ)言有部分錯(cuò)誤。

    第四檔:(3分-5分) 只能寫(xiě)出題目要求的一兩個(gè)要點(diǎn);只有個(gè)別句子能看懂,語(yǔ)法、詞匯錯(cuò)誤很多。

    第五檔:(1分-2分)只寫(xiě)出了符合題意的若干單詞。

    寫(xiě)作要求: 符合題意;邏輯通暢;語(yǔ)法單詞正確;卷面清潔。

    寫(xiě)作的難題--寫(xiě)作的步驟

    篇--段--句--詞

    1."篇" 明確主題

    2."段" 構(gòu)建結(jié)構(gòu)

    運(yùn)用"提綱"

    提綱案例

    《我最喜愛(ài)的老師》

    篇   主題:   

    段   提綱:            1. 老師基本信息介紹

    a. 年齡

    b. 相貌

    c. 所授科目

    d. …

    2.令我感動(dòng)的小故事 (描寫(xiě)與敘事相結(jié)合)

    a. 時(shí)間 b. 地點(diǎn) c. 事情的經(jīng)過(guò) d. 關(guān)鍵詞 shy; encourage

    3.我對(duì)老師的評(píng)價(jià)

    關(guān)鍵詞:enjoy his class; like

    3. "句"   填充內(nèi)容

    多用短句(簡(jiǎn)單句),慎用長(zhǎng)句(并列句/復(fù)合句/并列復(fù)合句)

    文中參雜若干語(yǔ)法正確的長(zhǎng)句能夠成為亮點(diǎn)并得到加分。

    短句為主,輔之于長(zhǎng)句。

    句子的完整、時(shí)態(tài)、人稱、單復(fù)數(shù)、以及動(dòng)詞的變形。

    修辭

    比喻  像…

    be like     The house is like a tank.

    He is like a panda.

    as… as…   I am as hungry as a wolf.

    The teacher is as busy as a bee.

    He is as strong as a horse.

    夸張       I am the luckiest boy in the world to have such a nice teacher.

    擬人       The sky is smiling with beautiful sunshine.

    4."詞" 

    可分為 "一般詞匯" 和 "具體詞匯"

    一般詞匯  He is a good man.  good

    → 具體詞匯 honest; diligent; hardworking; kind; nice; warmhearted; brave; selfless.

    "一般描寫(xiě)" 和 "具體描寫(xiě)" 

    一般描寫(xiě)   She is very beautiful.

    → 具體描寫(xiě)   She is very beautiful. She has dark hair, big shining eyes, and pretty face.